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Fun Street 79 Pleasantville, California May 25th, 2010 Coconut Lane 500 Dear Editor, Hello, I am Sue Ander. I really love the unpolluted Pleasantville. I had also certainly heard that our community, Pleasantville will have a shopping mall. As a teacher, I’ll say no shopping mall. I may see a lot of disadvantages, but I understand. I hope you will listen to my suggestion. Here are my three reasons why I don’t want a shopping mall: First of all, even though it helps with the economy and all those other things, it might not draw a lot of people from other countries. We never know, there might be a shopping mall nearby which draws a lot of people. My second is that the shopping mall feels messy. What I mean is that it might cause pollution, because the cars might rush over with dust and all those stuff. It also might make Pleasantville unorganized and might block people’s view. My third reason is that the old shops in Pleasantville make Pleasantville special. Look, the city in Korea called Geong Joo draws a lot of people by oldness. It is same for Pleasantville. Plus, what is Pleasantville if there is a shopping mall. Is Pleasantville new or old, or is it nothing? If people in our town don’t agree with what I said a lot, then we can cover the disadvantages. The old shops can be made better, not destroying them. Also that might draw a lot of people and help the economy with friendliness. No one hates friendliness, right? Therefore, I don’t want a shopping mall in Pleasantville. I hope you listen to my suggestion. Sincerely, //Sue Ander//, the teacher.